Draft:ProMotion

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Declined by Notcharizard 13 months ago. Last edited by SK55555 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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ProMotion is a VRR (Variable Refresh Rate) technology developed by Apple Inc. Displays with ProMotion technology can reach up to 120hz refresh rate. It was first introduced on the 10.5/12" iPad Pro (2nd Generation), and all following iPad Pro models. It was introduced to the iPhone with the iPhone 13 Pro/Pro Max, and all following pro models. It is also available on multiple MacBook Pro models and the Studio Display.!

Models containing ProMotion

iPad

iPad Pro 10.5/12.9" (2nd Generation) - June 2017

iPad Pro 11/12.9" (3rd Generation) - November 2018

iPad Pro 11/12.9" (4th Generation) - March 2020

iPad Pro 11/12.9" (5th Generation) - May 2021

iPad Pro 11/12.9" (6th Generation) - October 2022

iPhone

iPhone 13 Pro/Pro Max - September 2021

iPhone 14 Pro/Pro Max - September 2022

iPhone 15 Pro/Pro Max - September 2023

MacBook

MacBook Pro 14/16" (M1 Pro/M1 Max) - October 2021

MacBook Pro 14/16" (M2 Pro/M2 Max) - January 2023

Display

Studio Display - March 2022

References

^ "Apple introduces 10.5-inch iPad Pro, updates 12.9-inch model". Apple Newsroom (United Kingdom). Retrieved 2023-09-17