Draft talk:Chang Hwei Lan
G4 comments[edit]
Chang Hwei Lan (born 1964) There is a bold font on the bracket. In Influence (Education & Feminism) part, the first paragraph doesn’t have space, but the second to fourth paragraphs have spaces. Overall is quite clear. Mini Huang (talk) 02:10, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
G3's Comments and Suggestions[edit]
Subjective adjectives ought to be elimitated. Khallouangel (talk) 02:26, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
G1 comments[edit]
Overall, we think they have provided enough references. However, the introduction section is more like promoting the female artist. It will be better if the content in this section can be more objective, without using words praising her artworks or experiences. Eniiiid0802 (talk) 02:36, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
G5 Comments[edit]
1. Her emphasis on spatial techniques and leadership roles in promoting art profoundly influence Taiwan’s artistic landscape. Not sure if the word "profoundly" is suitable here.
G6[edit]
Clear and got enough citations, very nice BeeJazz01 (talk) 03:38, 22 May 2024 (UTC)