Talk:I've Just Begun (Having My Fun)/GA1
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:16, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- "some naming it one of the best songs in the compilation while others dismissed its lyrical content" - comma after 'compilation'
Done
Background[edit]
- "The song was written by Spears, Michelle Bell, Christian Karlsson, Pontus Winnberg, Henrik Jonback and produced by Bloodshy & Avant..." → The song was written by Spears, Michelle Bell, Christian Karlsson, Pontus Winnberg and Henrik Jonback, and was produced by Bloodshy & Avant...
Done
- Would the free release not make it a promo single?
Done
- Ref for release date?
Done
Composition[edit]
- "... is an electro-funk song, that according to the sheetmusic published at musicnotes.com..." → ...is an electro-funk song, and according to the sheet music published at musicnotes.com...
Done
- Be consistent - musicnotes.com in the prose, MusicNotes.com in reference
Done
- Who has compared it to "Hella Good"? - name critics
Done
- You don't need to link 'settling down'. 'Make believe' is marginal
Done
Critical reception[edit]
- In the Zone should be in italics
Done
Credits and personnel[edit]
- Source?
Done
Adressed all the concerns. Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:42, 30 November 2010 (UTC)