Talk:10 (MercyMe album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 22:38, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Since the album cover images requires an alt description, please fill in the currently unused parameter
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 02:54, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
• "Recorded" parameter: "2001—2009" --> "2001–09"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 02:54, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

Paragraph 1

• "Released on April 7, 2009 in commemoration of the tenth anniversary of the band's song "I Can Only Imagine"." --> I would state "single" instead: "Released on April 7, 2009 in commemoration of the tenth anniversary of the band's single "I Can Only Imagine"."
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 02:57, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
• "...as well as a re-recording of "I Can Only Imagine" featuring the London Sessions Orchestra and two other bonus tracks." --> "...as well as a re-recording of "I Can Only Imagine" featuring the London Sessions Orchestra, in addition to two other bonus tracks."
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 02:57, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

• Please link "music critics" to its respective article "Music journalism"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 02:58, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Background

• Again: "10 was released to commemorate the tenth anniversary of MercyMe's song "I Can Only Imagine".[2]" --> "10 was released to commemorate the tenth anniversary of MercyMe's single "I Can Only Imagine".[2]"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
• "The band was initially against the idea - according to Millard, they felt it had always meant a band was near the end of their career." --> "The band was initially against the idea, and according to Millard, they felt it had always meant a band was near the end of their career."
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Content

Music

• "10 includes fifteen songs: twelve of the band's number-one singles[2]" --> Number one on what chart?
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
• "Live versions of 10 of the band's songs were also included on some versions of the album.[6][7]" --> "Live versions of ten of the band's songs were also included on some versions of the album.[6][7]" (To be consistent since you spelt out the other numbers in the previous sentences.)
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Video

• Shouldn't the section's title be Videos, not Video?
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
• Rest is great

Release and commercial performance

• Good! :)

Critical reception

• In the Professional ratings box: "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
• In the Professional ratings box, please italicize The Baylor Lariat
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
• "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
• "he also praised the one-camera tour videos, but noted "Ten Simple Rules" as being "not their brightest musical moment".[8]" --> "he also praised the one-camera tour videos, but noted "Ten Simple Rules" is "not their brightest musical moment".[8]"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Track listing

• "(Credits taken from album liner notes)[5]" --> You can remove this altogether since it is directly below
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Personnel

• "(Credits taken from album liner notes)[5]" --> "Credits taken from album's liner notes.[5]"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

End of GA Review:

Great work again! Just some slight changes and fixes before passing. Please let me know if you need anything while doing this, I'd be glad to help! On hold for seven days! Good luck and thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:46, 25 June 2016 (UTC).