Talk:1960 North Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

" pressure of 966.7 mbar (hPa; 28.55 inHg), it struck just three weeks after the previous system devastated the same area." round this. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane
- It was a measured pressure so I see no need to round this. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"a cyclonic storm, with gale-force winds extending 150 km (90 mi) from the center." what is a cyclonic storm? link to the TC scales page :P YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Linked Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"As much as 100 mm (3.9 in) of precipitation fell across Madhya Pradesh.[9]" don't go rainfall crazy here YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Not sure what you're getting at? Just covering the affected areas. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
How come nothing from the JTWC? YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Annual report doesn't cover the NIO in 1960 and IBTrACS covers any track data needed. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Once onshore, the system slowed and turned northeastward.[19] It later dissipated over Nepal on August 28 as it interacted with the Himalayas.[18]" may you combine these kind of short sentences? YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- It's tricky to put that much detail in one sentence. I'd rather leave it as is. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Many areas recorded more than 200 mm (7.9 in) during a four-day span. The highest single-day total was 270 mm (11 in) in Bahadurganj.[18]" ditto here. I'd put a semicolon instead of a period and lowercase the T. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane
- Changed Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"The National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) " don't put "NOAA" inside the wikilink. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Changed Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" with the eye passing directly over the islands of Bhola, Hatia, and Ramgati.[22]" link to Ramagti. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Changed Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"The worst damage took place on Ramgati Island where 3,500 people were killed.[25][26] " now delink it here :P YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane
- Unlinked Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"a pressure of 966.7 mbar (hPa; 28.55 inHg).[22] T" as above, please round. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 12:58, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- It was a measured pressure so I see no need to round this. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"By December 3, it degenerated into a remnant low and eventually moved over southern India," is it me or should there be a "had" here? YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane
- I think it's just you :P Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 1 has 2 different date styles.
- Fixed Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I've responded to all your comments, and made most of the suggested changes. Thanks for the review YE! Cyclonebiskit (talk) 13:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]