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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC) Before I put some of my GAN wannabee's up, Ill review this piece of wikipedia work.[reply]

  • "Although several storms caused minimal effects, there were also several tropical cyclones left extensive impact." to "Although several storms caused minimal effects, several tropical cyclones also left extensive impact." YE Pacific Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • " it transitioned into a low pressure area offshore Georgia on August 9. Around that time, the system developed into a subtropical depression. " it seems that it was a low pressure area before that so change it to "it developed into a subtropical depression on August 9." YE Pacific Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • SE chart:"New England (Rhode Island" Do we need to send you do a parthesis doctor? :P YE Pacific Hurricane