Talk:1998 Atlantic hurricane season/GA2
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- "It officially began on June 1 and ended on November 30, dates which conventionally delimit the period during which most tropical cyclones form in the Atlantic Ocean. " source? YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- "at Category 3 intensity." remove this, it's not that important. YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- Make the season outlooks/season acitivty sections leave 2 headers. Why are they combined? It's not logical or continent! YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- "a hurricane hunter" link to Hurricane Hunter :P YE Pacific Hurricane
- "Additionally, many windows were blown out of hotels in Virginia Beach.[12]" remove that, it's not important. YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Flooding was also occurred in northern Mexico, " m "was". YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- "However, thereafter, the storm oscillated in intensity for several days," "however, thereafter" just is not correct, throw "however" out of the article and into the ocean :P YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Severe erosion" what kind of erosion? Beach erosion? YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)