Talk:2001 Motorola 220/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 12:55, 20 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

a saturated track - What is a saturated track ?
Andretti's second-place result advanced him from fifth to fourth, and Scott Dixon took over the fifth position - Who was in fourth before the race ?

A further five stoppages occurred; Max Papis spun into the turn 12 tire barrier, sustaining rear wing damage. Max Wilsonsimultaneously went off the track leaving the second turn and stalled. Herta slid into the turn three gravel trap, and Takagi went off into the gravel trap at the fourth turn. Wilson stalled on the track after exiting turn three, and Vasser went off into the turn four gravel trap. - There were five stoppages but you listed six incidents .
to prevent him from entering it. He was upset with --> o prevent him from entering it because was upset with .
Bräck lost his opportunity to take the pole position after slowing for Castroneves at Canada Corner on his final two timed laps - But it is mentioned that Bräck took pole position.

What is deluge ?
- Deluge in this instance means a heavy rainfall. MWright96 (talk) 17:02, 31 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
injured and all three retired from the race. - Change and to but .
after da Matta and Moreno --> after being passed by da Matta and Moreno .

@MWright96: The review is now complete. Kpgjhpjm 08:11, 31 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Kpgjhpjm: Thanks again for another review. All of the necessary edits have been made. MWright96 (talk) 17:02, 31 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]