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GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:16, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  15:16, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Checking against the GA criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    "Bräck, the season points leader heading into the race was awarded the pole position" - might read better with em dashes, but feel free to ignore...
     Done MWright96 (talk) 21:34, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    "The race was due to be held over 210 laps originally but was reduced to 168" - is there a given reason?
    It was the event's schedule had to be compacted because of the problems in the previous two days MWright96 (talk) 21:42, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    " and was held on 22 September at the Rockingham Motor Speedway in Corby, Northamptonshire, England, United Kingdom" - too many. I would personally just write "Corby, Northamptonshire", but I'll leave it up to you
    I've removed United Kingdom from the sentence. MWright96 (talk) 21:34, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    "Kniefel had reduced the number of laps to be run from 168 to 140 because of the danger from fading sunlight" - this could be mentioned in the lead also
     Done MWright96 (talk) 21:34, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    No original research found.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

This meets the GA criteria as it is. Couldn't find anything wrong with it! JAGUAR  21:11, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]