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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 09:29, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

And why not? Might as well review another NASCAR article. The review should be up soon. good888 (talk) 09:29, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Review is now complete. good888 (talk) 09:38, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

  • Is it possible you could add an image of the layout of the course?

Report

  • Nemechek rounded out the top ten.fastest drivers in the session. Noticed a full stop in the middle of that sentence. Remove it.
  • I would add the top ten fastest drivers in qualifying rather than the top five.
  • "Afterward, his crew chief Jimmy Fenning said" Unlink Jimmy Fenning.
  • "and I got my fender knocked in there a little." I would link fender.
  • "he was talking out of anger to Newman's team personeel about the incident." Change personeel to personnel.
  • "Dodge followed with 27 points, four points ahead of Pontiac in fourth." Note that Dodge bumped Pontiac to fourth.

Going to place on hold for now. I will promote once the issues are addressed. good888 (talk) 09:38, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]