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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:15, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:15, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • " second identically timed session, took place" I think this comma is unnecessary
  • "In the first practice session, Fábio Carbone set the fastest lap for ThreeBond Racing at two minutes and 15.216 seconds. " Makes it sound like he was the fastest on ThreeBond's team, not fastest overall.
  • " it put him the lead on the approach to Mandarin Bend corner and held onto it at Lisboa turn." This sentence needs work.