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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:07, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will take on this review. Expect comments to appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 12:07, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • You should add the city where the tournament was held not just the stadium.
  • "Held on the weekend of 2–3 August 2008, the participants" - participants of the tournament

Background

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  • "Spanish champions Real Madrid" - champions of what?

Summary

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  • Line up should be just a single word
  • Don't write Real Madrid as "Real".
  • "Van Nistelrooy almost scored inside three minutes" - inside of what half exactly?
  • "put the striker off by rushing towards him" - put the striker off is informal
  • "Real dominated and were punished for missing a host of chances" - missing multiple chances to extend their lead
  • "Receiving the ball from the left-hand corner" - left-hand corner of what exactly?
  • "the striker curled the ball past Dudek" - goalkeeper Dudek
  • "but Real sealed the win five minutes from time through Daniel Parejo." - How dd Parejo score?
  • Wikilink the word penalty to the appropriate article
  • "The striker was booed throughout the tournament as he failed to clarify his future" - failed to clarify his plans for the future
  • Wenger should have his first name spelt out and he should be wikilinked and mention he is the manager of Arsenal
  • ""Wenger confirmed Adebayor had agreed a contract extension, adding" - clarify that Adebayor agreed a contract expansion with the club
  • "Arsenal were beaten by- defeated

Standings

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  • "Each team plays two matches," - should be in past tense

Articles looks good but am putting the review on hold until the necessary improvements have been made. MWright96 (talk) 13:40, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking a look at this @MWright96: believe I have addressed your concerns. Lemonade51 (talk) 16:12, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Lemonade51: Great. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:25, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]