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GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:37, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 02:37, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, take your time. I'm expecting some issues since I nominated this so long ago.--WillC 08:46, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Paragraph 2

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  • Omit "the" before "finals".
    • Done

Paragraph 3

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  • Insert a comma before and after the phrase: "of the professional wrestling section of the Canadian Online Explorer".
    • Done
  • Insert a comma after "was a dream match for some".
    • Done

Production

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Paragraph 1

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  • Insert a comma after "TNA Management Director".
    • I feel it disrupts the flow being that it is an official title.
  • Insert a comma after "TNA commentator".
    • Same as above.
  • Replace "were sending" with "was sending".
    • Done
  • Replace "TNA were" with "TNA was".
    • Done
  • Insert a comma after "British wrestler".
    • Same as first two
  • Insert a comma after "would be Team Mexico".
    • Done

Paragraph 2

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  • Insert a comma after "Sabin pinned Doi".
    • Done
  • Replace "and lasted" with "which lasted".
    • Done

Tournament

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Paragraph 1

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  • Insert a comma after "pre-existing".
    • Done

Paragraph 4

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  • Insert a comma after "in the contest".
    • Done

Paragraph 6

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  • Replace "round won" with "round one".
    • Done

Paragraph 11

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  • The picture you used is here is kinda big, could you make it a tad bit smaller?
    • Shifted from 325px to 275px
  • Insert a comma after "Team TNA was the only team to not lose a member".
    • Done
  • Insert a comma after "Koslov at 15 minutes and 9 seconds".
    • Done

Reception

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Paragraph 2

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  • Replace "gave it less time" with "given it less time".
    • Done
  • Did you use the quote "Keller said the bout was a dream match for some with "lots of cool spots from start to finish" but that it had "little context early" and was more just a "bunch of spots"" before? Because if so, it may not be necessary to mention a second time. Same with "it had some spectacular (and ridiculously dangerous looking) spots,".
    • Used it in the lead, no where else.

Aftermath

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Paragraph 5

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  • Insert a comma after "November 9".
    • Done

References

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  • Since there are quite a few, could you please make sure that none of them link to the same publishing company/website more than once? Thanks.
    • Some are from the same publisher but none are the same article.

End of GA Review:

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Not at all a bad article; I found very few issues with this article throughout. I shall put it on hold for seven days to allow you to make changes. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 16:48, 3 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]