Talk:2009 Emirates Cup/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Taking on the review of this article. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Summary

• "and he nearly made goalkeeper Grégory Coupet pay" - might want to reword the last part of this piece of text slightly so it is more formal.
• Wikilink Atlético Madrid the first time it's mentioned
• "and ex-Arsenal player" - former
• "when substitute Andrey Arshavin volleyed in from a cross" - Mention the player that executed the cross that allowed Arshavin to score
• "Germán Pacheco equalised for Atlético from a counter" - I didn't understand what is meant by counter. That will need clarifying.
• "defensive mistake" - this should be spelt as a defensive error

That is all from me. All references are in order. Going to put this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:10, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96: thanks for taking a look at this, got all corrections I believe. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:09, 26 December 2017 (UTC)

{{ping|Lemonade51} Good work. Now promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 26 December 2017 (UTC)