Talk:2010 Chinese Grand Prix/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:58, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a short description and then add WP:ALT text to every image.
- "Fernando Alonso for Ferrari, started from third, and passed" → "Fernando Alonso for Ferrari started from third and passed"
- Add a hyphen between "single seater".
- "Others teams in the field" → "Other teams in the field"
- "onto its flap and onto the" → "onto its flap and the"
- "Button used the soft compound tyres though an unbalanced car" - reword
- "Hisapnias" - typo?
- "Petrov took his first Formula One points finish in seventh" → "Petrov took his first Formula One points to finish in seventh"
- "the importance about changing" → "the importance of changing"
- "Domenciali" → "Domenicali"
- Add a comma after Luca Cordero di Montezemolo.
- "pleased duel other drivers" - reword
- "McLaren moved past Ferrari to become the new leaders" → "McLaren moved past Ferrari to become the new leader"
- Sources are archived.
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:22, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Have made changes according to the queries raised above MWright96 (talk) 08:04, 20 July 2021 (UTC)