Talk:2012 FA Cup final/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:15, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
- ok i will take a look at this. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:15, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
- The date of the final clashed with Premier League fixtures,[5] it was scheduled to provide a clear four-week period between the end of the English season and the start of UEFA Euro 2012. - the construction is wrong - either convert the comma to a semicolon or period, or take out "it was" and flip the construction to something like "Scheduled to provide a clear four-week period between the end of the English season and the start of UEFA Euro 2012, the date of the final clashed with Premier League fixtures."
- Chelsea's victory set up a Community Shield match against Manchester City, the winners of the 2011–12 Premier League. The two sides met in the Premier League three days after the final, a match that Liverpool won 4–1 - Huh? You're talking about Chelsea and Man City...and then mention Liverpool. Confusing....
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality: - few twaeks needed as above
- Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
minor prose tweaks andwe're there...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 22:17, 4 July 2015 (UTC)
Yikes - just noticed ref 40 is a deadlink....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:19, 7 July 2015 (UTC)