Talk:2013 Paris–Nice/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:19, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Will review. MWright96 (talk) 08:19, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Teams
[edit]- "Among the 184-rider start list was only one previous winner of the race, with 2000 race winner" - reptition of winner
Prologue
[edit]- Wikilink roleurs
Stage 1
[edit]- The last part of the first paragraph is not cited
- "made the early breakaway from the field, and managed to e* xtend their advantage to the main field" - reptition of the word field
- "an increase of pace in the peloton caused it to split apart," - I know what it split apart means but separate would be better
Stage 2
[edit]- "and the rest." would be better as and the rest of the field
Stage 3
[edit]- "The climb itself was seen as the pivotal point of the day's action, whether the sprinters could stay with the main field before the descent back into Brioude." - needs a reference
Stage 5
[edit]- "mainly second-category and third-category climbs compared to the first-category finishing climb" - better mainly second and third-category climbs compared to the first-category finishing climb
- "some nine minutes in arrears of the overnight leader Garmin–Sharp's Andrew Talansky." - some nine minutes behind the overnight leader Garmin-Sharp's Andrew Talansky
Stage 6
[edit]- The last part of this section's first paragragh needs a citation
- "With 64 points, Tschopp held a 40-point lead over Argos–Shimano's Thierry Hupond, with only ten points left to be taken at the finish of the following day's individual time trial at Col d'Èze." - ditto
Stage 7
[edit]- "Evaldas Šiškevičius of the Sojasun team was next to hold top spot," - first place
- "Indeed, Quintana's time" - remove Indeed
References
[edit]On hold until all the issues I have raised are checked. MWright96 (talk) 14:54, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- Should hopefully be resolved. Craig(talk) 16:14, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes all points have been resolved. Happy to promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:06, 29 August 2016 (UTC)