Jump to content

Talk:2015 Japanese Grand Prix/GA1

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Z105space (talk · contribs) 18:21, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I will review this one. Z105space (talk) 18:21, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

[edit]

General

[edit]

Background

[edit]
  • "Pirelli cites the nature of the track and the high lateral energy loads experienced in the corners, in particular 130R — typically taken at full throttle and top speed in dry weather racing — as reasons for the hardest tyres being used. The suppliers expect a performance difference of 0.6-0.8 seconds per lap between the compounds." - Change all the uses of present tense words to past tense words.
  • Spell out DRS and put the acronym in brackets.
  • "Mercedes were leading Ferrari by 153 points," - was?
 Done apart from last point; discussion at nominator's talk-page. Eagleash (talk) 11:50, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
 Done

Free practice

[edit]
  • "there were two 1.5-hour sessions on Friday and another one-hour session before qualifying on Saturday" - 1.5 hour should be reworded to 90-minute.
  • "as Valtteri Bottas saved wet weather tyres." - wet weather tyres needs hyphenating.
  • "Red Bull's Daniel Ricciardo was third," Red Bull's should be spelt as Red Bull driver.
  • "Behind Ricciardo, both Williams led the two Ferraris in a session marked by all drivers doing a lot of laps due to the limited running on Friday." - I feel this sentence should be rewritten.
 Done Eagleash (talk) 12:07, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Qualifying

[edit]
  • Wikilink red flag to Racing flags#Red flag as the non-motor sport expert will not understand what it is.
  • Change Manor Marussias to either Manor Marussia cars or drivers.
 Done Eagleash (talk) 12:08, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Race

[edit]
  • You start many sentences with On lap xxx. Consider revising.  Done
  • "Hamilton went into pit lane for a tyre change on lap 16." - You're missing the word "the" before pit lane. Done Eagleash (talk) 12:10, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Post-race

[edit]
  • "with Williams in third an additional 129 points behind the Scuderia." - use a different word other than Scuderia.
 Done Eagleash (talk) 12:10, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

References

[edit]
  • No dead links
  • Reference 42's publisher should be formula1.com instead of the FIA
  • Reference 43 has no work or publisher.
 Done Eagleash (talk) 12:10, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. On hold until the issues have been rectified. Z105space (talk) 07:19, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I have done the rest, I believe. Thank you so much for your work, Eagleash! Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:57, 2 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]
All the points raised have been rectified. I hereby award this article GA status. Good work! . Z105space (talk) 09:20, 2 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 09:40, 2 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]