Talk:2017 FA Community Shield/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"The FA brought the kick-off time an hour earlier" - brought forward
Put The Football Association's acryonyms in brackets after the first time it is mentioned

"he noted they had kept the spine of their team" - could you clarify what is meant by this phrase by rewording it to encyclopedic language?
"Conte confirmed Eden Hazard and Tiémoué Bakayoko were ruled out of the match with injuries and confirmed Victor Moses would play;" - repetition of confirmed

"he officially took over responsibilities from John Terry in July." -the responsibility

The article would be better off if you wrote that the stadium observed a minute's silence for the Grenfell fire victims.

On second thought, disregard as I have just found out the meaning of moment of silence and it is the same as you have written in the article.

"The defender was taken off and replaced by Kolašinac," - mention the head injuries as you have done in the first image in the sub-section.
" when he went to ground in the penalty box after a challenge from Héctor Bellerín." - fell to the ground
"a late challenge by Pedro on resulted in the Chelsea attacker being shown a red card." - this sentence doesn't say who Pedro callenged on the Chelsea side that led to his red card.

That is all I found during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 25 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96:, have made corrections, thanks for the review. Just one issue with the Grenfell fire in the summary, could do with clarifying here. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Lemonade51: See my above response. Apart from that, this article is now at GA status. MWright96 (talk) 19:00, 26 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]