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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:01, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Copy changes

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Teams

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  • They entered the game with a 6–6 overall record, and a 5–3 record in conference — no need for a comma here. "A 5–3 record in conference" is not a standalone sentence. A comma and "and" separate otherwise separate sentences.
  • Their first win came the following week against Arkansas State, but dropped their conference opener the next week against Houston — missing subject in the second half
  • travelled probably should be traveled (one L) for American English

Summary

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  • Soos' → Soos's
  • Fix After a two plays
  • Very good use of links for football jargon here

Notes

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  • References are archived (I see this was done after nomination, but this isn't a bad thing to do when you nominate a page).
  • Earwig turns up no elements of concern.
  • Images are all freely licensed (from the nominator, too!). They do need alt tags, which for most can be a simple "Refer to caption". You can use the |Alt= parameter in the infobox. (That infobox set with its strange parameter capitalization should really be changed over to standard, lowercase, underscore-using param names... Might need to float the idea to the project.)

@PCN02WPS: 7-day hold. All it needs are a handful of style tuneups and image alt tags. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:24, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Sammi Brie Thanks for the review! I have made the copyedits above and added alt text for the images (I believe I did this correctly, though I am inexperienced with doing that so if I made a mistake somewhere just let me know). I also noticed a couple iffy sources (SB Nation) so those have been replaced, and I ran it through some scripts to catch date formats, dashes, and archive the rest of the sources. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 05:21, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Smooth. Things look good. Was surprised to see SBNation flagged as unreliable despite no listing at RSP. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 18:20, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]