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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
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[edit]- Archive all archivable sources (recommend using this tool). Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
- I suggest moving the 3rd reference to the end of the sentence. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
- The quote from the last sentence in "Summary and production" is from this source, not the one currently being used. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
- Done, source and reference have changed Chompy Ace 00:31, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
- The following sentences need references (or need references moved to the end of the sentence):
- "A viewer counted Didit blinking 362 times."
- "Didit originally planned for the video to be only 10 minutes long..."
- Done, removed partial sentences that are unneeded Chompy Ace 00:55, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
- "Several Internet memes were published on Facebook and Instagram."
- Done sentence removed as unnecessary Chompy Ace 00:48, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
- "...with the number of downloads reaching 10,000 as of early August."
- Done, sentence within the Video game adaptation section has removed Chompy Ace 00:52, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
- The following sentences need rephrasing (since they should all be in past-tense):
- Change "is shot" to "was shot"
- Change "the video is a sarcastic commentary" to "the video was a sarcastic commentary"
- Change "video is only meant for" to "video was only meant for"
- I suggest removing the "2020 films" category since this really isn't a "film". Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 22:12, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
- Done, removed per WP:NOTDEFINING Chompy Ace 00:23, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
Some Dude From North Carolina, may I ask why is the Adaptation section removed? It is significant to know that the video has been adapted to a game, and it is supported by a reliable source. GeraldWL 01:05, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Gerald Waldo Luis: It wasn't removed when I started my review. Feel free to bring it back. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 01:16, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Surprise! Chompy Ace 02:07, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
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