Talk:3D Tetris/GA1
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV (talk · contribs) 14:55, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this~!--AlexandraIDV 14:55, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
- Lead
- The developer is variously referred to as "T&E Soft" and "Technology and Entertainment Software" at different points in the article, it should probably be consistent. I am not familiar with the developer, so I can't say which variant is most appropriate here.
- ポリゴブロック should be romanized as Porigo Burokku.
- Gameplay
- It is not immediately clear what the difference between a game mode and a game type is - there is some clarification later on, but the reader is left wondering for a while
- Consider re-organizing information so that the game modes' introduction comes immediately before their definition.
- The image caption is pretty wordy and spends time on describing the image as an image rather than what's depicted. I would consider something basic like "The player moves falling blocks to fill up a three-dimensional well."
- Development
- I don't think it is necessary to repeat the Japanese spelling and romanization of Polygo Block (but if you do, the romanization is missing a double consonant here too)
- Was it only released in the US, and not Canada?
@Abryn: Some issues, but not too many. I've put the review on hold for seven days - contact me if you have any questions or when the issues are addressed.--AlexandraIDV 09:26, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
- @Abryn: Thank you! I went ahead and made one further minor change myself, and think the article is looking good now. I'll promote it to GA in just a moment~!--AlexandraIDV 17:32, 4 June 2020 (UTC)