Talk:410 Tactical Fighter Operational Training Squadron/GA1

GA Review

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   1. You have a number of books that have been referenced. Could you add them to the bibliography at the bottom?
   2. The squadron was also disbanded in 1964 You need to mention the previous disbandment
   3. these were replaced ... these were replaced Repeated phrase, also ambiguous. Please re-phrase
   4. with which the first victory was claimed I know you said it in the intro, but could you repeat it here?
   5. although there are other claims that the top-scoring night-fighter unit On what basis?
   6. which means "wandering by night" in which language?
      1. I have sent an e-mail to 4 Wing asking for this information.
   7. Link Royal Air Force, RAF Drem, RAF Scorton, RAF Acklington, RAF West Malling, RAF Coleby Grange, RAF Hunsdon, RAF Zeals, RAF Colerne, Hartlepool, AIR-2 Genie, CFB Cold Lake
   8. for the first official operation of the war You mean the squadron's first official operation? Or the RCAF's?
      1. Squadrons, now done.
   9. D-Day and the invasion of Europe Could you re-arrange this section to put the June stuff before the July and August stuff?
   10. On the night of 8/9 June no member of No. 410 Squadron flew Yeah, that's really interesting...
   11. What wing/group was it part of during WWII?
   12. 410 Squadron was reactivated was it referred to as 410 squadron or No. 410 Squadron? (Same for 445)
   13. No. 445 AW(F) Squadron What does AW(F) stand for? All Weather (Fighter)?
   14. Afterward the Squadron only used the Mosquito, it used the variants VI Run-on sentence. Full stop required here.
   15. 'The Vampire was the second jet-powered aircraft commissioned by the Royal Air Force, but was never used in a combat role. Er, I think you'll find that it was.
   16. 'It was used as a trainer aircraft that was easy to use. My personal experience with trainers is that most are...
   17. '410 then replaced the Vampires with the Sabre, which was one of the finest dogfighters of its day. When was this? The RAAF and SAAF had great difficulty getting their hands on them in the early Korean War period. Which was why they flew Vampires and Meteors. Were they manufactured in Canada?
   18. 'Following the Sabre was the CF-100 Canuck When was this?
   19. Any plans to replace the Hornet? They are getting a bit old now...

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail: