Talk:75 (album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk) 20:06, 9 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

General notes

Lead

01. Link "Top Jazz Albums"

Comment: This is a re-direct and Billboard is already linked. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

02. Also the Lead of this article does not follow WP:Lead, which states that "The lead serves both as an introduction to the article and as a summary of its most important aspects."

What improvements need to be made? Seems like a decent lead to me. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Overview

01. "With the exception of one track" - which track was that?

Comment: Details in the next sentence. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

02. "20 anniversary world tour" - spell the number out completely, "twentieth anniversary world tour" per WP:ORDINAL

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

03. If Hungary is linked, then why isn't Switzerland linked?

Done. Linked both in infobox and lead, but neither from then on. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Tracks

01. "Zawinul plays the vocoder on this track[2]" - is missing a period before the citation.

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

02. "and the album closes..." - re-wording to something like this "while the album closed"

Done. Also moved ref from mid-sentence to end. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

03. Can you add the year of release to all the albums mentioned here? - Example... Was released from Album (2011).

Comment: This detail is unnecessary. Readers can click on the album for more information. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Awards

01. I'm not sure if this is really needed here. "The other nominees were Urbanus by Stefon Harris, Sounding Point by Julian Lage, At World's Edge by Philippe Saisse, and Big Neighborhood by Mike Stern.[12]" Maybe just add a table about the award the album had won.

Credits

01. Source? (explained in the other nomination of your other GAN article)

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 23:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Final notes

The article seems a bit good and somewhat nicely written. I'm going to put this article On hold for seven days, until further development can be made to address the issues that I had stated. Also maybe adding a sample can help the article as well. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 20:06, 9 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Failing article, editor hasn't responded to messages and haven't fixed any of the problems. AJona1992 (talk) 00:09, 16 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have addressed most of the concerns raised above (and added comments as well). I have asked J04n to re-examine the article and re-nominate for GA status, if interested. Otherwise, I will nominate the article in the near future. The reviewer AJona1992 is currently blocked. --Another Believer _(Talk) 00:01, 29 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

User:J04n is not interested in nominating the article at this time, so I have nominated the article on behalf of the both of us. --Another Believer _(Talk) 02:49, 29 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]