film composer by the Time magazine, -> composers -> by Time
In 2009, Time magazine -> no need to write magazine
in its list of World's Most Influential People -> whats his numerical rank?
sold more than 300 million records -> This cannot be used. Their is consensus at List of best-selling music artists that he has not sufficient certifications to back up those claims. If necessary, I can link you.
making him one of the world's all-time top selling recording artists -> As I said above, due to consensus, he is no longer on this list. Check if you'd like.
spanning two decades -> 80s, 90s, 00s -> 3 decades
My main issue with these sections are the tons of unsourced content. Please provide sources for claims like "Some of his notable compositions were performed live by the London Philharmonic Orchestra in April 2010.", "Rahman has written jingles for ads and composed several orchestrations for athletic events, television and internet media publications, documentaries and short films." etc.
For the awards, try and give some sort of an introductory sentence instead of just "He won"
Where is the source for all those four wins, six wins?
Let me know when these issues are taken care of.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 20:47, 1 April 2011 (UTC)
This article has been failed. Main issues remain, aside from the fact that the nominator has been gone for a month. A separate editor fixed some issues, ignoring the largest one I specifically pointed out twice.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 07:41, 12 April 2011 (UTC)