Talk:About a Girl (Sugababes song)/GA1

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Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) 02:11, 29 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References number 50 and 51 are dead. However, there are not disambiguation links. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

They are not dead. I just viewed them. Till I Go Home (talk) 11:07, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There was mash-up with the numbers. This and this are dead. And now I checked number 50 is also dead. — Tomica (talk) 11:17, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Well I replaced the 2nd one, but I can't find a reliable source to replace 1st. Till I Go Home (talk) 11:28, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, but you will have to remove the information then. — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

No issues— Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

known by his stage name RedOne ---> better known by his stage name RedOne
I can see that "About a Girl" is repeating a lot in the first paragraph. Try something like the song, the single. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Critics were divided in their reviews for "About a Girl" ---> Music critics were divided in their reviews of "About a Girl. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
and also became a moderate success in Poland ---> ...and also achieved a moderate success in Poland — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Where is Vasquez Rocks? I think you should add near Los Angeles.— Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Why there is not information in the lead for the live performances? It should summarize the whole article. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background and release

produceers ---> producers — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"About a Girl" was re-recorded to feature the vocals of new member Jade Ewen and the removal of the vocals by ex-member Buchanan for the release of Sweet 7 in 2010. ... It needs clarification. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"About a Girl" was later digitally released on 8 November, 2009. Which version? The new right?— Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Jay-Z's picture should be aligned to the right and also (pictured) is needed in the caption. — Tomica (talk) 13:00, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done all addressed. Till I Go Home (talk)

Composition and lyrical interpretation

while the song itself is composed in the key of F. ---> which F? Major, minor? — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
although the middle eight has a "90s dance-inspired" feel to it ---> with its middle eight also containing some "90s dance-inspired" feel to it. — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
link Girls Aloud — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

and a terrific, 90s dance-inspired middle 8.". ---> Repeating of the middle 8 + spot the other mistake;) !— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
OH HAHAHA. It took me like ten minutes to realise what you were talking about. Till I Go Home (talk)
"Get Sexy" should be linked in composition and unlinked here. — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I also think there are some terms that have to be linked. — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lady Gaga - linking — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Sweet 7 - repetition, change in the album or whatever. — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Chart Performance

in the top 40 ---> in the charts Top 40— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

All in all looks good, just add Los Angeles when mentioning the Vasquez Rocks — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

Looks good.— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Other sections

Also good look.— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Release history

The reference goes to the region where is released.— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

1. and all the other Digital Spy references, remove Digital Spy from the title
9. Not Discogs.com, just Discogs is fine, the same as other from this type
12. Needs space between Digital Spy and Hachette Filipacchi
13. Does Drowned in Sound has publisher?
15. Publisher is Rovi Corporation
16. Publisher is Independent Print Limited
37. work=Daily Mirror | publisher= Trinity Mirror
38. work=Daily Mail | publisher= Daily Mail and General Trust
43. Un-italicize BBC
45. Same as 38
47. work=The Sun | publisher= News International
Some of the references don't have dates or accessdates. Please add it.
49. Billboard is work, and Prometheus Global Media is publisher

They need some work. Putting it now on hold. — Tomica (talk) 22:37, 13 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Aside from number 1, I fixed them all. Digital Spy includes the name in the title so no reason to remove. Till I Go Home (talk)

It looks awkward having the Digital Spy, two times in the references, but nevermind its your choice here. I am passing the article. Next time, this is well intentioned advice, work more on the references, before nominating the article, and of course keep the good work like now:D ! — Tomica (talk) 10:32, 14 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

THANKYOU :P. Till I Go Home (talk)