Talk:Adriana M. Garcia
Peer Review
[edit]Hi BabyElephant3, I used your draft for one of my peer reviews, I’ll paste it for you below in case it can help with your editing process. :)
This overall is a really solid draft, but a few minor edits would take it to the next level. Your About section works as a good lead, it touches on her life and education which is a good connection to the later section, but when it comes to discussing the themes of her work we don’t see as much discussion of them in the works or exhibitions sections. Your content is balanced between sections and well organized, but the use of a quote direct from the artist worries me since it sort of diminishes the neutrality of the article. You use in text citations really well throughout the article, and there is a solid repertoire of references. Aside from those concerns, the draft looks really good and sets you up really well to publish the article. Jojobruin24 (talk) 22:54, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
Wiki Education assignment: Chicana Latina Art and Artists
[edit]This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 2 October 2023 and 15 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): BabyElephant3, ProjectName3 (article contribs).
— Assignment last updated by AlmaDigital AlmaLopezGDA (talk) 19:24, 15 December 2023 (UTC)