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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk ·02:50, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Grabbing this for a review if that is okay with you. I have seen about half of the first season of this and I am really enjoying it (which is a lot since I am usually indifferent about comic book media). I will have my comments up soon. Aoba47 (talk) 02:50, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Overall comments

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  • Make sure to add an alt to the image in the infobox.
  • Put the years that Captain America: The First Avenger and the Agent Carter film were released.
  • I would recommend replacing the “,and” in the final sentence of the third paragraph of the “Lead” with a semicolon to prevent any ambiguity that the criticism of the season led to the show's cancellation.
  • In the “Development” subsection, add “for” between “allow” and “any” so it reads “this would probably not allow for any standalone episodes”.
  • Break up the sentence with the quotes from Atwell about diversity in the fourth paragraph of the “Writing” subsection. I would suggest starting a new sentence at “and saying”. The large quote overwhelms the sentence so it may help to separate into a new one.
  • Add the descriptive term “the films” in front of the list of films in the “Design” subsection for clarity. Same for the list in the “Filming” subsection.

Final comments

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