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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 10:01, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 10:01, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
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    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY (Highest is 0%.)
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
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  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Dead links checkY
  • Images appropriately licensed checkY

Prose Suggestions

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  • His untimely death in AD 19 upended those plans, however suggest However, those plans were upended by his untimely death in AD 19.
done
  • who was seemingly on his deathbed in 23 BC, suggest who appeared to be on his deathbed in 23 BC.
done
  • However, Marcellus died of an illness that had spread throughout the city of Rome that year. suggest However, Marcellus died that year of an illness that became an epidemic in Rome
done
  • With Marcellus gone, suggest Now, with Marcellus dead,
done
  • Pannonians gave up on their plans suggest Pannonians gave up and surrendered.
done
  • Tiberius and the Ignotus is the the supposed to be here?
Yes, because "Ignotus" was not the child's actual name and the gender isn't known. Grammatically, I think it's as though someone were saying "Tiberius and the boy". I could be wrong, though.
  • period Caligula's reign needs an of between Caligula and reign.
done
You're working overtime today. SpartaN (talk) 17:31, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]