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Quality problem[edit]

This article appears as if it was written by a little kid. Someone, please, update this article.

Looks good for me. I think someone had done the update.Ang Ling Yuen 04:49, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

This article certainly contains some errors. For instance this passage:

Aku easily defeated Jack's father, and went on a rampage. The deities, sensing the good in Jack's father, summoned him to a secret place. Taking the essence of good within him, they forged the sword that Jack carries now. Using this sword and a magical suit of armor, Jack's father confronted Aku. However, he was unable to destroy him, and had to settle with trapping him in the earth. Shortly after, the wife of Jack's father gave birth to Jack.

The sword was forged by some monks, not the gods that fought whatever "great evil" it was that spawned Aku. In addition, I've changed "the wife of Jack's father" to "Jack's mother", as the former is needlessly wordy. I think that this article still requires a rewrite. -- HenryTodd 22:09, 4 April 2006 (UTC)