Talk:América & en Vivo/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 06:27, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Full review coming in seven days. Simon (talk) 06:27, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Mario Taradell of the Miami Herald who → comma after Miami Herald
by CAPIF → by the CAPIF + change wiki link to full name rather than abbreviation
The EP peaked at... The EP was certified → repetitive word
"America, America" was released... and peaked... and reached → was released, peaking... and reaching
number one in Mexico City → what is this record chart?
An editor wrote for Billboard magazine complimenting → writing for Billboard complimented
Mario Taradell from the Miami Herald... Taradell compared → try to join the two sentences into one to make better flow
Sources for tracklist are missing
Date format should be DMY or MDY? The dates on Romance are DMY (21 September 1991) while on this article are MDY (September 21, 1991). Please be consistent
The rest of the article: excellent

On hold for seven days. — Simon (talk) 12:07, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Simon, thank you for taking your time to review this article. The charts were compiled by a person named Vilo Arias as Mexico did not have an actual singles chart at the time. I removed it for now. Otherwise, I believe I have addressed all the issues that you have brought up. Thanks again, Erick (talk) 15:09, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@HĐ: Erick (talk) 16:01, 3 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Oops... Sorry for the delay. I'm passing it now. Short but great article!