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Looking good at first glance. Will review. -shirulashem(talk) 19:56, 10 July 2009 (UTC) Some things to work on:[reply]

  • I've tightened up the lead a bit by removing some of the sentences summarizing academics and extracurriculars. I was able to shrink the lead from 4 paragraphs to 3. Deltawk (talk) 21:51, 10 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Well done. The article is well-written, the sources have been verified, the coverage spans the important points, the minor WP:NPOV issues have been corrected, it has a stable edit history, and there are some nice pretty pictures. -shirulashem(talk) 19:37, 16 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]