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Reviewer: Mm40 (talk) 13:43, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, I'm Mm40 (talk · contribs) and I'll be reviewing this nomination against the good article criteria. I'll be watching this page, and I'll be very active over the next few days, so you should just leave any comments or questions here. Thanks, Mm40 (talk) 13:43, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

My first impression is that the article is very short, as most of it is background. However, after looking for more sources (using JSTOR and EBSCOhost and such) and looking at the talk page, I realize the article is actually longer than one would think it could be. Thus, length isn't a problem.

That's all I can find for this otherwise very nice article. I'll happily pass this after these issues are resolved. Cheers, Mm40 (talk) 13:43, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your useful feedback; I'll get to this in the next few days. (Some things I will clarify in the text: bas-relief is not a typo, and a pension declaration is a statement made by someone seeking a military pension; it often contains a summary of their military activity, and may include affidavits of other people. They form a portion of the historical archives for wars of the period.) Magic♪piano 16:57, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think I've taken care of these. Let me know if there's anything more to do. Magic♪piano 01:47, 5 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK then, I'll pass the article now. Thanks for your contributions, and please consider reviewing a nomination or two at WP:GAN. Thanks, Mm40 (talk) 12:22, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I do occasionally do reviews (although not nearly as many as I've put in). Magic♪piano 13:14, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]