Talk:Andriantsimitoviaminiandriana Andriandrazaka/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 20:12, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• He became an independent king upon his father's death . Date?

• Added.

• "the easternmost and largest piece. " Piece seems strange to describe land, territory?

• Changed to territory.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

I'll assume good faith that you'll respond to the two very minor points. For Madagascar in the 1700s it seems a very decent entry.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:22, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

• Thanks for the quick review and your comments. I've made the changes you've requested. Cheers, Lemurbaby (talk) 21:11, 20 August 2013 (UTC)