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Reviewer: Wizardman 01:09, 15 November 2009 (UTC) Overall the article's good, though I did find grammatical and comma errors. I went and fixed those. However, I have the following issues:[reply]

I'll put it on hold and will re-look at it when this is taken care of. Feels light but i'll trust that you've definitely looked through a lot of sources. Wizardman 01:09, 15 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Another note:
  • "Beginning his junior season, Hedlund was elevated to first line" clarify first line. Is that jargon for starter?
  • "He played in two games as a rookie and did not record a stat during the regular season, but in six playoff games he spent six minutes in the penalty box." Might as well cite the stats, in case that's questioned in the future.

The article's better though certainly not perfect (I'd likely oppose an FAC). It does pass the requirements for GA status so, so on that note I will pass the article. Just make sure to clarify that first note. Wizardman 16:18, 15 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]