Talk:Astoria Park/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]- Add alt text to every image being used.
- "pool and bathhouse was" → "pool and bathhouse were"
- Remove the comma after "glass brick columns".
- "local resident" - is "local" necessary (both times)?
- "grand stands" should be one word.
- "play field" should be one word.
- "a playground and a restroom on the pool's southwest side was" → "a playground and a restroom on the pool's southwest side were"
- "northern playground and its restroom was" → "northern playground and its restroom were"
- "Ssome" - typo?
- Wikilink The New York Times and Robert Moses.
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- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 01:05, 10 July 2021 (UTC)