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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs, external links OK
  • Images appropriately licensed
  • In "the" shoreline
    • Corrected
  • Part of the Confederate coastline was within the state of Texas, and the most significant port at that time was Galveston. Awkward
    • Rephrased, is this better?
  • more bases for Union ships and fewer bases for blockade runners. proximity alert for "bases"
    • Dropped the second one
  • What kind of ships did Renshaw have?
    • Done. Thank goodness for DANFS.
  • continue to fire would be bad political optics Suggest "against the laws of war"
    • Done
  • Short but sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:00, 27 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]