Talk:Battle of Song-Jin

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I will add to it in due course

GIVE ME A CHANCE TO ADD TO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Staygyro (talk • contribs) 00:48, 19 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Horrible wording / errors

"When the news approached Hong Taiji, he decided to drown into the battlefield. Though numbered heavily, Hong decided to remain defensive and conducted small scale attack on the enemy front line. When the enemy became exhausted, he then released full-scale attack to achieve victory. Yet, the impatient Chongzhen emperor ordered his general to be more offensive."

1. "drown into the battlefield" - No idea what this means. 2. "Though numbered heavily" - Outnumbered? 3. "Yet, the impatient Chongzhen emperor ordered his general to be more offensive." - Improper format