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- There are a lot of non-indept sources, but these are ok as they are uncontroversial things like policies, their own POV and maps etc
- rpted "Canda's Wonderland"
Fixed.
- "debut" not appropriate as the machine can't actively do things
Changed to "premiere"
- Lead needs to be expanded to summarise body
Added additional content.
- Use {{quote}} not the curly ones
Changed cquotes to quotes
- You cannot stick external links in a prominent way in the main body. They can only be used as inline cites or at the bottom
Fixed.
- "loose belongings - one designated for each of the three trains" use a spaced ndash or unspaced mdash here
Fixed.
- Can it be explained what the Behemethon is?
Fixed.
- Part of "Station" is not sourced
Removed unsourced material.
- "The unofficial Wonderland fan club raves " raves is hyperbolic
Fixed.
- howstuffworks? RS?
Removed.
YellowMonkey (bananabucket) (help the Invincibles Featured topic drive) 06:43, 6 November 2009 (UTC)