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GA Review

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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 20:47, 29 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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  1. This article is no where ready for a GA review it fails on references
  2. ref 1 is a primary source
  3. ref 3 is that is a book used which is not clear it needs to be formated using WP:CITESHORT
  4. ref 4 what makes http://www.revolutionarydemocracy.org/rdv3n1/bsingh.htm a reliable site also needs access dates
  5. ref 5 same as ref 3 above and needs a page number
  6. ref 7 same as ref 3 needs a publishing location
  7. ref 8 needs the cite web template used with details filled in and what makes http://www.sbsec.org/s.bhagatsingh.html a reliable site
  8. ref 9 see ref 3 above
  9. ref 10 as above and publishing location needed
  10. refs 11 12 and 16 Sanyal (2006) presume is a book needs adding to a bibliography
  11. ref 13 and 14 see WP:CITESHORT
  12. ref 15 needs the cite web template filing in and what makes http://www.shahidbhagatsingh.org/index.asp?link=problem_of_pb a reliable site
  13. ref 17 same as above but web site is http://www.allaboutsikhs.com/sikh-martyrs/sikh-martyrs-shaheed-bhagat-singh.html
  14. ref 18 we do not use wikipedia as a reference
  15. Thats just an example of whats wrong the rest of the references are more or less the same as I do not believe this can be rectified in time I am going to quick fail to allow you to work on these before submitting again.--Jim Sweeney (talk) 21:20, 29 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]