Talk:Blaze the Cat/GA1
- I'm sorry for the long delay @Tezero:, I've had a busy holiday and my 420 has just finished (still recovering by the way!). Time zones are a pain. I'll start the review right away. ☠ Jaguar ☠ 21:14, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- Pass or Fail:
- Everything checks out here - the lead complies per WP:LEAD and the GA criteria. I also see no copy editing problems here.
Design and characteristics
- "While crafting the 2005 Nintendo DS game Sonic Rush" - would 'developing' be a better word to describe the development/making of Sonic Rush?
- "Blaze comes from a world outside the Sonic the Hedgehog series' main one" - please clarify, does Blaze come from a different world/dimension from the main Sonic the Hedgehog series? If so would Blaze comes from a world [dimension] outside the main Sonic the Hedgehog series?
- "...but Sonic insists on helping, so she fights and defeats Sonic, while Eggman discreetly kidnaps Cream" - why did she fight and defeat Sonic if he insisted on helping her?
- "Blaze, along with numerous other characters, is turned into a statue by the antagonistic Time Eater; when he saves her, she expresses regret at needing his help but thanks him anyway" - who saves Blaze? Presumably Sonic, but it doesn't say?
From a copy editing point of view, there are very little prose problems with this article as much of it is under her appearances in the video games. I couldn't find many problems with the prose as they are mostly plot details, but other than that, all references are in check, the lead complies per the GA criteria and the Reception section is looking good. I'll put this on hold for the compulsory seven days but I know that these points will be addressed quickly! Thank you and sorry for the delay. ☠ Jaguar ☠ 21:40, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
- Yeah, heh, @Jaguar: I need to study for an upcoming test at the moment but I'll return before long. Tezero (talk) 21:57, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
Close - promoted
Thanks for addressing those points so quickly (and sorry for my long delay reviewing this). This article didn't have many problems so there weren't many points to make. Every section now complies per the GA criteria, so I'll promote this to GA. Personally I don't know much about Blaze as I've only played the older Sonic games. I don't know what the time is where you are, so I hope you have a good time today for 420! ☠ Jaguar ☠ 21:58, 20 April 2014 (UTC)