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Very well written article - I only have a few minor problems:

  • "Instruments played in the song include a guitar and piano, the latter of which has a F2-Eb5 range. Jackson's vocals on the track are C4-C5 and aspects of the song are performed in the key Ab major."

This sentence feels a bit technical (I'm a musician and I'm not sure what C4-C5 means) - at the very least I think some of the musical terms should be linked.

Seems a bit unclear - are the "unreleased additional scenes" from Paterson's alternative version? Also the first sentence should probably say "previously unreleased".

  • No, they are unrelated, hopefully I've cleared that up in my recent edit. It does go on to say that Paterson's alternative version was never released by Sony (as they disliked it), hopefully that clarifies things further, but feel free to distinguish them further if you feel it's necessary. It's good to have an outside look after all. — R2 14:33, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I'm happy with the section now. Cavie78 (talk) 14:57, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

And that's it! Let me know when you've addressed my concerns and well done on getting the article this far. Cavie78 (talk) 11:41, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]