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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 12:39, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • Will do soon. AryKun (talk) 12:39, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Permalink to version reviewed.
  • You could use the gloss for serrated from the body in the lead.
    •  Done
  • There shouldn't be references in the lead. Instead, those facts should be mentioned and cited in the body. Specifically, "It was a fairly close relative of mammals, the only group of cynodonts alive today" needs to be added to the body.
    •  Done. The part about it being a close relative of mammals is already covered in the classification section.
  • Link clade at first mention in both body and lead, and consider adding a gloss like (group formed by all the descendants of a common ancestor).
    •  Done
  • temporal region (area behind the orbits) → temporal region (area behind the eye sockets)?
    •  Done
  • formed by the maxillae → Link maxilla here instead of the next paragraph and perhaps add (upper jaw bones) as a gloss
    •  Done
  • The first para in Dentition is uncited, assuming you forgot to add the ref
    •  Done
  • Explain what a cusp is or link.
    •  Done
  • References are reliable and consistently formatted.
  • Spot checks on refs 1 and 2 found that they supported the claims they made.
  • Not required for GA, but you could add alt text for the images.
  • Pinging Trilletrollet. AryKun (talk) 07:52, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]