Talk:Breakdown (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer:  Candyo32 00:52, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

Infobox

• To keep citations out of the infobox, list the recording information in the background.
• The other, is Carey and Bone Thugs-N-Harmony gambling in a casino. --> "The other features Carey and...."

Background

• I would put the quote that Carey made in a box, then merge the blockquote into a prose.

"backbone. --> "backbone."

Controversy

• four new song --> four new songs
• Alot of this information is about #1's rather than "Breakdown." Also almost all information near the end is about Greatest Hits (Mariah Carey album) which didn't even include the song.

Compostion

• Link hip-hop and Contemporary R&B

Critical reception

• I know you hae probalby searched all over, but making sure, could there be any expansion to the critical reception?

Chart performance

• October 1997, however... ---> October 1997. However,
• "My All"/"Breakdown"; however, --> Breakdown." However,

Music video

• Just a suggestion, considering NFCC rules, is there a better scene with more involvement in which you could explain more? Also could their be just a little bit more explanation of the synopsis.

Formats & track listings

• Need sources

Charts

• Need linking

Good work! Fix the minor problems and I'll check back. Candyo32 21:54, 28 November 2010 (UTC)