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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 09:58, 13 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Happy to have a look through. Josh Milburn (talk) 09:58, 13 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • "bryophytes, or plants." Bryophytes are plants, aren't they?
  • "texture of the conk" What's a "conk"?
  • "subhymenium (the fertile spore-producing surface)" Is your definition not of hymenium rather than subhymenium? Also, a link to hymenium somewhere in this discussion would be good.
  • "Phylogenetic analyses of mitochondrial small-subunit rDNA sequences suggests that B. nobilissimus belongs in the hymenochaetoid clade, closely related to the genera Oxyporus and Schizopora." This is unclear- it's not obvious what is "closely related".
  • Perhaps a link somewhere (in a see also, even) to Phellinus ellipsoideus, which is now recognised as the largest polypore species, would be nice?
  • "Other bryophytes" Why other?
  • What do you mean by "mature layers"?
  • "simple-septate", "fascicles" and "thin-walled" strike me as jargon- links or explanations would be good
  • You're a little inconsistent on tree names- sometimes you use "common name (Specific name)", sometimes "Specific name (common name)" and sometimes just "Specific name". Consistency would be good.
  • "Species have been found at elevations of 1,000–4,000 feet (300–1,220 m)" Did you mean "specimens", here?
  • "meaning pre-disturbance surveys and site management are needed." I'm not keen on this- do you perhaps mean something like "...are required before people can [whatever]" or "meaning [agency] has judged that pre-disturbance..."

Pictures and sources check out. A really interesting species! I've made a few edits- please double-check them. Josh Milburn (talk) 10:29, 13 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.