Talk:Broke (The Office)/GA1

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Nice job with the article. I made some changes to the article and here is my comments:

"Broke" is the twenty-third episode – should be "23rd" since the other numbers in the article aren't spelled out.
but Dunder Mifflin offers to buy ~~his company~~ it out
as Dunder Mifflin V.P. Charles Miner – spell out "V.P."
in the 18-49 age group – use an endash.
Add who Steve Martin is (ex. American actor Steve Martin).
(See also Bright Lights, Big City by Jay McInerney, whose first chapter is titled, "It's Six A.M. Do You Know Where You Are?") – Is this really necessary here?
Link CBS
like Charles brown-nosing to David ~~Wallace~~ and realizing Dwight is eccentric
The A.V. Club should be italicized

I'll put the article on hold so that you can fix this. :) Cheers, TheLeft orium 13:17, 17 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again Leftorium! I think I got them all... — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 13:26, 17 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nice, I will pass it now. Congrats on another GA! ;P TheLeft orium 13:30, 17 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]