Talk:Brooklyn Nelson/GA1
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Reviewer: UnidentifiedX (talk · contribs) 11:25, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
Hello @Pamzeis: I will be reviewing the article. Please allow 1-3 days for the assessment to be completed.
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Assessment
[edit]- Comprehension:
- Verifiability:
- Comprehensiveness:
- Neutrality:
- Stability:
- Illustration:
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| (a) (prose) | The reviewer has left no comments here |  Undetermined
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| (b) (MoS) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| (a) (references) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| (b) (citations to reliable sources) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| (c) (original research) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| (a) (major aspects) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| (b) (focused) | The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| The reviewer has left no comments here | Undetermined
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| (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) | Please read the comments below | 
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| (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) | Please read the comments below |
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Comments
[edit]Illustration
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One of the main things I immediately noticed is that this article does not contain any images or media. Unfortunately, this is one of the 6 good article criteria. It is widely suggested that a GA classed article contains pictures; if you need any assistance adding one please notify me and I will be hapy to help - UnidentifiedX (talk) 11:46, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, no free images of Nelson are available at the moment; a non-free one would fail WP:NFCC#8, as Nelson's appearance is not significant in any form. Per the GA criteria,
Illustrated, if possible, by media
(emphasis mine). Pamzeis (talk) 13:53, 6 June 2022 (UTC) - UnidentifiedX? Pamzeis (talk) 03:55, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry for the wait. Thanks for your response, totally understandable. I appreciate some articles can't be illustrated by media. I'll continue the assessment shortly. UnidentifiedX (talk) 09:26, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
Early life
[edit]- “She has a younger sister
” Who?
- Well, her name is Lacey (according to the refs), but I do not think the readers would benefit much from knowing her name...
- “she appeared in several local productions by First Stage, Curtain Up Players and the Huntington Regional Theater
” You could give examples. However I am happy to leave it as it is right now.
- Well, since The Little Mermaid has already been mentioned, there's only one example I can give, which would seem a little bare in my opinion
- “As of 2018, she lives in New York City with her mother and sister.
” As a curious reader, what happened to the dad?
- He probably stayed West Virginia or something, but no source mentions it...
@UnidentifiedX: Responded to your comments 
Pamzeis (talk) 03:21, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
Hi, UnidentifiedX. When can I expect more comments? I am fine with waiting for a longer period of time, but I am only asking because it has been over a week since I responded to your previous comments. Thanks. Pamzeis (talk) 04:56, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
UnidentifiedX? Pamzeis (talk) 08:58, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
Note: I have relisted this article at the nominations page as the reviewer has not responded to my pings, having not edited in over a month. Pamzeis (talk) 06:10, 18 July 2022 (UTC)