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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:51, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
Will read and give some feedback soon. MWright96 (talk) 18:51, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Cardiff City[edit]
- "Anthony was invited for a trial with his hometown club Newport County at the age of fifteen but was forced to cancel." - what was the reason Anthony had to cancel? - Unfortunately the ref doesn't say, his quote simply states "I couldn't make it"
- "He was part of the club's youth side that won the 2002 Welsh Youth Cup" - wikilink 2002 Welsh Youth Cup to FAW Welsh Youth Cup - Done
- "He scored Cardiff's fourth goal of the match,season heading in from a Paul Parry corner." - remove "season" - Done
- "Anthony signed a contract with the club in late-October 2004." - remove the dash between "late" and "October" - Done
- "Anthony was released by the Cardiff." - either Cardiff City or just Cardiff. - Done
Bristol Rovers[edit]
- "during the 2006–7 season." - 2006–07 season - Done
- "However, he suffered a setback at the start of Rovers 2007–08 campaign" - Rovers' - Done
- Wikilink Red card to Fouls and misconduct (association football)#Red card (dismissal) - Done
- "In early-February 2010," - remove the dash between "early" and "February" - Done
- "Anthony suffered an ankle injury in late-February" - same problem as above - Done
- "setting up a goal for Jo Kuffour but also scoring an own goal" - wikilink own goal for non-football readers - Done
- "Even after his return, Anthony's future at Bristol Rovers looks slim," - looked - Done
- "as Anthony was among players to be released by the club," - how many players? - Done
- "ending his six year association with the club." - Bristol Rovers - Done
Hereford United[edit]
- Wikilink Valley Parade - Done
- "The dismissal resulted in a three match" - three-match - Done
Newport County[edit]
- "he was part of the Newport team that finished 3rd in the league," - third per MOS:NUMERAL - Done
- "Following the end of the season, Anthony was offered a new contract by the club" - a comma is needed at the end of this piece of text - Done
- "but Newport manager Justin Edinburgh stated his belief that "There was no malice" - I'm thinking a slight reword to no malice was committed - Done
- "Anthony made his return to training in late-January." - remove the dash between "late" and "January" - Done
- "Weeks later, Anthony played his first match in seven months, when he played for the club's reserve team against Bristol Rovers." - reptition of "played" - Done
- "His contract renewal for the 2014–15 season was delayed whilst he underwent fitness tests which was ultimately unsuccessful." - were - Done
Reference[edit]
- References 2, 44 is missing the author who wrote it - Done
- References 27, 28, 29, 32, 35, 36, 40, 45, 46, 48 are dead and need archiving or replacing - Done
- Reference 59 is missing the date it was accessed and the author who wrote the article - Done
That's all the quibbles I've got from the article. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:23, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for another review, made a quick start on some fixes. Kosack (talk) 14:18, 29 June 2018 (UTC)