- The lead is poorly structured, consisting of one-sentence paragraphs.
- Citations are not supposed to be in the lead unless the information is unique.
- There are several areas of the article that contain uncited information, including a few citation needed tags.
- Many areas of the article look sloppy with bulleted lists and one-sentence paragraphs.
By looking at the article, I feel it needs some more work, mostly with citations, before it can be considered for GA. Therefore, I will have to fail it. It may be renominated when the above issues are addressed. Dough4872 (talk) 16:52, 31 July 2009 (UTC)