Talk:Cheryl Tunt/GA1
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 03:34, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
Will review this soon. Ruby 2010/2013 03:34, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
Comments[edit]
- There are a few dab links. More to come. Ruby 2010/2013 03:35, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
Done
- Links for Malory Archer and Cecil Tunt?
- I wikilinked Malory Archer, but I did not do the same for Cecil Tunt. She has only mentioned her brother only once or twice in the series.
- What is the Judy Greer quote referring to? What has become her family? Her work place? (Note that I've never watched this series before)
- Somewhat related to the above comment, I think the article would benefit from a quick overview of the series (i.e. what the premise and setting are)
- Both quotes address her personality. For the overview, do you want me to put it in the lead?
- "... characteristics an adopts..." - and?
Done
- I'm sceptical that Greer is "best known" for her work in Arrested Development (and the article cited lists many productions she's been in)
Done
- Arc and personality: indicate who Adam Reed is and link him (then remove the link in the below development section)
Done
That's about it. I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 16:49, 4 August 2012 (UTC)